I’ve had a couple people review with one person being an English teacher. I ‘m glad Word doesn’t use Red lines like they used in the old days. I was impressed the initial review had 127 comments! I was like “YES!” this person knows what they are doing. I have one more section, which is 4 pages, is my story and testimony and this portion is done. When I was in high school, I’m sure my response would have been different, but I’m so glad for people who have great passion for their work, and aren’t afraid to help people out! Praise God for this persons talents.